First draft feedback

– Lighting could be a bit better at beginning
– Doesn’t persuade me to buy it
– Move/cuts on beats 🙂

– Shots are brilliant – and background
– Good to watch!
– More faces + people?
– Really good!

– Show them using the product
– Good editing
– Flows smoothly

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